BeerbeerBeerBeerb BeerbeerBeerBeerb BeerbeerBeerBeerb BEEEERRR!!!!!! i love maki-chan already XD only critic here is try to be consistent with the outlines of the speech bubbles, you can change them for effects like talking thorough a phone, thats usually is effective, but it can get distracting when the same yelling from last page seems to have different outlines this page- also, you have three different speech bubble type outlines this page, a bit visually jarring i get the purpose of each- no mistake in that- i just feel the page ends up looking a little cluttered as a whole because of it.
BeerbeerBeerBeerb
BeerbeerBeerBeerb
BEEEERRR!!!!!!
i love maki-chan already XD
only critic here is try to be consistent with the outlines of the speech bubbles, you can change them for effects like talking thorough a phone, thats usually is effective, but it can get distracting when the same yelling from last page seems to have different outlines this page- also, you have three different speech bubble type outlines this page, a bit visually jarring
i get the purpose of each- no mistake in that- i just feel the page ends up looking a little cluttered as a whole because of it.
Thank you very much for the praise!